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JENNY the shopkeeper lay dead from a single gunshot. ADRIAN, PETER, SAMANTHA and NATASHA, four customers, lay dead on the ground. BRENDON, the perpetrator is wounded. CRAIG hides in the store. Brendon and Craig shoot each other.A moment passes. Two of the customers and the shopkeeper, stand up not knowing where they are or what has happened. The front door is locked. Their only escape is either by a door leading towards a well light room or a door leading to a dark basement.

Theme

Horror

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Period
This short film is set in current day Australia, with current day values, accents and personalities.

Partial Script

1 INT. CORNER STORE. DAY JENNY the shopkeeper lay slumped over the shop counter dead from a single gunshot to the forehead. ADRIAN, PETER, SAMANTHA and NATASHA, four customers, lay dead on the floor covered in their own blood from gunshot wounds. Natasha holds a mobile phone. Samantha is surrounded by cans of food. Peter lay on top of Adrian, his body covering Adrian. The sunlight shines on their bodies. BRENDON, the perpetrator is wounded with a gunshot to the leg, hides in the store. CRAIG, a young man attempting to protect himself with a hand gun, hides in the store. He is covered in bloodied scratches. BRENDON
Come out, Craig. You’ve got five doe’s on your conscience.

CRAIG
They’re not mine dickhead.

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